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Subject Articles Feedback: English (Ryden, Abdullah)

  • For home page:

    • lots of anmations (positive)​

  • For English pages:​

    • Layout:​

      • add a menu bar inside the subject for easier navigatons​

      • lots of animations (positive) 

      • the navigation buttons at the end of each article need to be bigger (back to top, home, next page, etc)

      • ​replace "C.T." in the subject navigation bar with something else because it is unclear

      • good navigation for grades in article 2

      • good design for article 3 

    • Content:​

      • Some spelling mistakes in English article 2​

      • Text spacing for the Incentive section of article 2 needs to be longer

      • spacing between titles for articles and text needs to be larger

      • The history of English in Intro page is good

      • good pics

      • VERY INFORMATIONAL

      • Likes how i summarized writing tips before going in depth (article 4)

Subject Articles Feedback: Math (Ryden, Abdullah)

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  • For Math pages:​

    • Layout:​

      • FIX EMPTY SPACE IN INTRO PAGE​

      • change "next subject button" to "back to intro" for better navigation

      • make images popup

    • Content:​

      • good

      • history in intro section is good 

      • add "courses" and "testimonies" page

Presentation Math Article Feedback

​FEEDBACK NOTES:

  • Add hues and variety in colour (I decided not to take this advice as i believe that the preexisting colours of my website add to my branding)

  • Add more images and highlight them instead of sidelining them (I believe that this is a great suggestion and added more images) 

  • The text is too close to the edge (The text is a good distance away from the edges, but sometimes people zoom in too much, which brings the text very close to the edges. I do not feel the need to implement this suggestion.)

  • Some walls of text in certain articles (I decided to implement this suggestion in article 4, but believe that articles like article 1, 2, and 3 don't need it as the reader of my website won't be looking at all of the sections of the article, and the individual sections are already fairly short. ie: in Article 2, viewers of the website would simply navigate to their own grade instead of reading through all the grades.)

    • Could add spaces between text (I increased the spacing between the paragraphs in article 1 and 2)

    • Could add bullet points. (I reformatted the article 4 math problems into bullet points)

  • Add a dedicated section for recent dev (I decided not to take this suggestion as i have already integrated recent developments into the articles themselves, for example, in article 1 i detail how math developed in recent history and became what we learn at school today, and in article 2 i mentioned how students develop through math, all of which is supported by article 3, which has coutless reccent examples of people's experience with math. Creating a new, separate section for recent developments would be repetitive of the content already in my website.)

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